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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
What would be a black low cut dress without a shrewd woman ? What would be a sensual lipstick without a loved girl ? What is life without feelings ? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Feelings give us direction in life so without them I guess we'll all be lost ... in a frozen wilderness. Helen |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, What's with the shrewd woman shtick? It sounds as if you don’t trust women in low cut black dresses. I think they’re sweet kids. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you honeybunch for the wonderful comment, I very love the image and the poetic metaphor. great yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yo Bobby, it's all about feelings, even shrewd ones, I think I used this english word perhaps with an other idea that the french sense...However I keep it unless you have a better proposition... have a nice day yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
those questions put a whole new light on that subject...interesting write...makes one stop and think...for sure |
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