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Open Poetry #44

An Angel's Teardrop

FallenAngelz
New Member

since 2009-01-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2009-01-05 08:42 PM

Enjoy

An angel's tear drop,
To bring an angel pain and sorrow,
Gives the causer a life long curse within its soul.
A curse of never being forgiven.
Forgiven by the gentlest form of life.
An angel trying to hide its tears within the rain.
Cursing the one that have given her so much pain.
Every time it rains,
You will remember of the angel that cried,
Dropping its tears to the lands,
Tears that has given the lands more life.
Rain that devours your soul,
With regret,
Till the sun sets,
You shall ease your soul
And hope you won't feel
The angel's tear drop.
As for the tears gives life to others,
It curses you by stealing life from you,
To live in pain and sadness,
And to lose more life
Weakening your soul.
Trying to find the angel you have once hurt.
By following her tear drops.
So you may one day ask for her forgiveness
Hoping she would forgive you,
So you won't ever suffer from the curse of
An angel's tear drop.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-01-06 06:51 AM

Quite a sad poem,
but very enjoyable, all about forgiveness but i think it's about asking for the forgiveness of yourself

Well writen..

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-01-25 10:36 AM

Awwh, that always made me shed a tear. Beautifully written.

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