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Daisy shivering in her skin
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Daisy shivering in her skin |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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As appendage to its native green forlorn, it sinks almost passively within the earth's possession in schism's shift the winds of west play both requiem and liberator to its lanky stemmed oppression. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-06-2009 09:48 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nothing lasts forever..... Great words to express the final days of this beauty. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the winds of west play both requiem and liberator" ...neat line...in a well-written and descriptive poem...think I'll go back and read it again...and again |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...the title is perfect...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Love this one, goddess of ink. It reminds me of the cheerful yellow daisies that grow wild along our roadside. And we are supposed to detest them because they are invasive species. I know that this is a concern, but how can I not love the little yellow daisies? A |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - I read, I take it in, I like... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You make me feel just like your daisy! Intensely vivid imagery! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the poor little daisy. Now I'm shivering. Goddess, you put me in her skin with your incredible writing! Her life was brief ~ but the memory of her lives on through the beauty of your words.  Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."it sinks almost passively within the earth's possession"... I found this tidbit staggering. Mich, you have such a refreshing paintbox of expressions! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a beautiful poem. The daisy is not so different from us, when you think about it. Ida |
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