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norunnin
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0 posted 2009-01-04 11:03 PM



that was a cruel thing of the flesh to say
it was a new day
but you took all of that
spoken without a word said
tho it is my fault
i thought you were dead
my bro
is no longer the person that i read
i must admit he is like me then
he has exchanged weakness
for malice and hatred

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steavenr
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1 posted 2009-01-04 11:30 PM


"i must admit he is like me then
he has exchanged weakness
for malice and hatred"

interesting 'confession'...certainly explains the title...dark, somewhat scary, but I did find it compelling...very compelling

norunnin
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2 posted 2009-01-04 11:42 PM


my friend went to boot.
he came back mildly sociopathic.

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