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Moonlit Serenade
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Moonlit Serenade |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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Moonbeams dance within his eyes as we lay silently entwined gazing up at the luminescent night sky Each star… a dream a hope a wish The fragments of Our ancients’ past Lighting our current path Embracing our souls and lightening our load Each sparkle a smile And wink A soft chuckle |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh how lovely is this! Your writing is beautiful!  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Jill, You're doing good work these days Hon. Love Bobby |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jill~ Such a soft lovely read~ Thanks for sharing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Roniece-Thanks for the compliment chica. :P As is your writing. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Bobby- Gracias good sir. I'm just stretching my writing chops. I'm glad I've finally found my muse. It should come in handy next semester for my poetry writing class. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Marge-I'm happy to share my poetry with this great community. I've finally found my inspiration. Thanks for your warm reply |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love your choices of 'lighting' and 'lightening' in their contexts...a very nice, enjoyable write...really liked your progressive description of the stars...nice |
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