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Richy
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0 posted 2009-01-04 10:56 AM



Dawn’s swollen
river of blood,

held back,
and engorged,

finds you,

serene,

silky and peaceful,

as lips blow soft,
and whisper dream speak,

in hushed tones,
of want,

as my breath runs,
fervid,
upon your neck,

sleek, and satiny.

Sustenance,

of my lush and loin
are ravaged,

and imbibed,

as you break, my fast,
and satiate,

with your holy
sacrament,

cottony soft,

nourishing me,
with the salt,

from the swollen blush,
of your meaning,

as your body weeps
communion,
onto my longing,

and covetous tongue,

savoring climactic tears
as they ripple from the spring,

of your stirrings.

Undulating,
through your whole,

of sigh
and harlot,

you culminate,

my hunger.

The sway of hips,
aloft,

as you sweat,
and strive

through this morning’s,
observance.

As it always would be,

your smile,
your warmth,
your delight,

that is, my
testament,

that will always,

set me free.


We are, the moment.

We’re indivisible.

This is,
our sanctum.

Thy name is genesis,

and you are,
my zeal.

As the wind blows pure,
throughout our,

becoming.


© Copyright 2009 Richy - All Rights Reserved
Anniepimm
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1 posted 2009-01-04 08:34 PM


Interesting poem very well defined you seem to have a very expressive way with words..

Excellently writen....

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-01-04 08:41 PM


that's our Richy for you Annie very expressive and creates such wonderful wordart for us on our pages blue

Richy, love your work as always RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Richy
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3 posted 2009-01-05 08:52 AM



Thanks Annie for the read and the nice review, glad you liked it!

Richy

Richy
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4 posted 2009-01-05 08:54 AM



Thank you Roniece for always being so very kind, it really is so appreciated!


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-01-07 02:03 AM


Those inner sanctoms santorum are highly sensuous and downright sexy!

You are a master at writing titillating poetry!

Another ~ Soon you'll be charging me!

Warm hug of appreciation!
Linda

ethome
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6 posted 2009-01-07 02:44 AM


give genesis a big one for me too................smile

Loved so many of the intimate lines in this.

Eric

Richy
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7 posted 2009-01-07 05:43 AM


Not that I'd ever have anything to charge for, but if I did dear Linda, your's would always be free.

Thanks for always being such a great friend!
Richy

Richy
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8 posted 2009-01-07 05:44 AM



Thanks so much Sir Eric, you really are such a gentleman.

Thanks buddy!
Richy

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