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OwlSA
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0 posted 2009-01-04 07:18 AM


TO ARLENE
22 November 2008

Arlene,
as you probably know,
.  .  .  it was a strange thing .  .  .
today, I was thinking
beautiful thoughts
about you
up there in Heaven
and tonight,
of the very same day,
when I phoned Chrisjan,
Sandra called
“Hello Mom”
from the background.
I didn’t mishear her.
In fact, I didn’t hear her
at all
and Chrisjan asked me if I heard her
and I said I didn’t
and he repeated what she said,
and I said, “Hello daughter”.
I know you won’t mind her calling me that.
In fact, I know that you will understand
better than I do,
better than she does,
that it is
a tribute from her to you
and
a gift from you to me.

- Owl

© Copyright 2009 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-01-04 08:39 PM


Diana... this is a very beautiful gifting here.. wonderful poem from your heart...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
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2 posted 2009-01-04 11:19 PM


a very personal write...a lovely, personal write...thank you for choosing to share this...it is evidently heart-felt and indeed lovely
OwlSA
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3 posted 2009-01-05 11:21 AM


Thank you Roniece and Steaven for your heart-felt sensitivity.  It is most appreciated.

- Owl

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4 posted 2009-01-07 02:53 AM


Diana,

This is beautiful and I am sure that Arlene understands and approves.  You are such a loving and lovely woman-friend.

Love,
Alison

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5 posted 2009-01-07 06:21 AM


Touching. Mark
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6 posted 2009-01-07 09:02 AM


Diana~
'understand'?
I have no doubt Arlene would 'understand',
but that she gives you an angelic embrace for sharing the *gift*~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-01-07 09:44 AM


Yo OwlSA,

Since I don't know these people, I'm afraid I found this a little confusing.

Bobby

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-01-07 10:23 AM


Wonderful write, dear Diana! Sometimes when a Mother moves on, she looks for someone who might best represent a continuation of a motherly bond on Earth. And the connection is therefore fully understood by the involved hearts.

Intense!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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9 posted 2009-01-07 11:01 AM


Thank you Alison.  Arlene and I weren't close.  We liked and respected each other, but had nothing much more in common than the fact that she was the grandmother on my daughter-in-law's side and I was the grandmother on my son's side.  I could have been more tolerant of her.  However, yes, I am sure she undertands and approves of what I said in the poem.

Thank you Marc-André.  

Thank you Marge.  Yes, I believe she would.  

Bobby, Chrisjan (pronounced Krisyun) is my son.  Sandra is my daughter-in-law.  Arlene was Sandra's mother and she died on 23 October this year.

Thank you Margherita.  I believe you are right, and that Arlene and Sandra and I instinctively felt that, without our putting it clearly in words, until you did.  Thank you.  The relationship between my daughter-in-law and me is not perfect, but we both try very hard.  

- Owl

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