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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-01-03 11:03 PM


Bones is sick of kids
ragging on him
about his old man
being locked up.  

He knows
they’re bringing that crap
from home,
but he too small
to beat up on their parents.  

He takes
the second best
alternative.  

One he can handle
without getting himself killed.

Bobby

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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
1 posted 2009-01-04 12:10 PM


We all go through this.

This

Is something I understand.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2009-01-04 04:08 AM


Bones is clever.

yann

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
3 posted 2009-01-04 04:59 AM


Very Interesting poem pore Bones,
I think we have all been bothered by annoying kids at one time or another
Excellent write...

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-01-04 11:26 AM


Thanks Paul,

Bones decided to feed his tormentors a knuckle sandwich.  He's good with his hands.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-01-04 11:27 AM


Thanks Yann,

Yes, Bones is very clever.  He's always thinking.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-01-04 11:28 AM


Thanks dear Anniepimm,

What you say is very true.

Love Bobby

ethome
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7 posted 2009-01-04 06:34 PM


Maybe that'll teach the kids to keep their mouth shut.

Can't say as I blame him because we all react and sometimes overreact when such situations occur.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-01-04 06:46 PM


Thanks Eric,

I'm glad you understand.  Sometimes life's lessons are hard.

Bobby

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