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Richy
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0 posted 2009-01-03 11:37 AM



Don’t hold, too close,
sweet love,
as I am moved, by avarice,
and,
erstwhile beguin.

Don’t covet, sweet whisper,
as I extend,
the depth, of your rapacity,
to loosen
and circumscribe,
the bounds,
of your constrictions.

Dampen me,
dear love, with the bloom,
of freshness,
between, louvers minora,
drowning me,
in the sweet sachet
of your bouquet blue,
and lush,
of flora.

The thrust, of my evolution,
is unfulfilled,
between pant, and hollow,
and the holy place,
of secret sanctums.

Origin measured
by parched labellum
drunken from,
shadow cast,
my development,
arisen,
engulfed,
by the sway,
atop pillars potent,
of force,
and vigor.

Lave me,
with passageway,
sodden with weather,
doused visage,
pillowed libido,
tongues braided
in essence,
of carnal, and kiss.

Just don’t fall,
my loves dear,
I am faithful, by hanker,
amorista, sublime,
as I’m lost,
in the love, with,

a sweet reminisce.

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2009-01-03 12:55 PM


You know I'm gonna have to protect you when all the girls come looking for you....There'll be too many to handle so, I'll have to relieve you of some of them.

Please please keep writing!
.....................................

I'll be read/watching~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Eric the protector.

Richy
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2 posted 2009-01-03 03:08 PM



Ah yes, Eric the Great I see… Protector (stealer) of maidens, and femme fatales alike, hmmm… I’m thinking their might be a conflict of interest in such a noble and selfless (cough) underpinning… much thanks to you anyway Sir Eric, but I will just have to fend for myself, alas poor me, but for thee sacrifice… and, humanity   (LOL)



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-01-03 06:05 PM


Richy, I agree with you. I doubt that Eric's intentions are all that altruistic! lol

Mind you, he might take some of the pressure off of you! Too much of a good thing can wear a man out!

Here I go again! ~ Saving another of your cleverly-sensual poetic treats! You're a naughty boy who still comes across as a choir boy! ~ well, almost!  


Linda

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-01-03 08:54 PM


Nice romantic flow of thoughts...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-01-03 10:13 PM


*sigh*... dear Richy you had me at the first line...    and as for our Eric.. hmmm..now that boy can protect me anyday!!

  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2009-01-03 10:50 PM


Richy - I must say that you are an artist, and your writings are excellent. This one is fabulous...

BC

Richy
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7 posted 2009-01-04 02:39 AM



Pressure schmessure, remember Linda Lou Lou, a hard man is good to find... wait, is that how it goes? Well, something like that (lol). Hmmm, maybe I should be singing in the choir for always being so, kind of, naughty, I've never met a, real good, girl I haven't liked, alot.





Richy
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8 posted 2009-01-04 02:41 AM



Thanks much James M, I hope you and your's have a fantastic new year! So nice to see you again!

Richy
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9 posted 2009-01-04 02:46 AM



Yes Roneice I think Eric is the one who needs the protecting.

Thanks as always for making such nice comments!


Richy
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10 posted 2009-01-04 02:49 AM



No artist here Bill, just throwing words against the barn, and sometimes a few of them stick.

Thank you though friend, you always have such encouraging things to say!

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