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FadingSun
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since 2000-05-01
Posts 76
Southern California

0 posted 2009-01-02 10:10 PM


Missing you in this moment

My heart is wildly afire
with the deepest love for you
As heaven misses its angel
I am missing you, too…

I miss the elegant smell of your hair
and your decadent perfume,
I miss the beautiful light that dances in your eyes
and how it reminds me of the moon…

I miss your hand clasped in mine
and the spark within your kiss,
But if I only had one thing to say
it would easily be this…

All the world’s beauty and grace,
Without you would not exist
But the most beautiful thing about you
is that you are so many things to miss.

© Copyright 2009 Steve Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2009-01-02 10:13 PM


Steve.. this is very beautiful and sad to read ... I wish you a day of smiles and laughter to come ... thank you for sharing a piece of you here with us on our pages blue...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-01-02 10:18 PM


elegance and decadence...not bad in the same package...a wistful melancholy

"I miss the elegant smell of your hair
and your decadent perfume,
I miss the beautiful light that dances in your eyes
and how it reminds me of the moon"

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-01-02 10:56 PM


FadingSun - the sadness is within the words of this writing and are expressed well. Wish you the best...

BC

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