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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-01-02 09:17 PM

Along A Shore

On the beach
with my darling
we walk
along the shore,
she knows how much
I love her,
she's the woman
I adore.
Life seems so precious
in tender moments
such as this,
each time a wave
comes to shore
I kiss my
sweethearts lips.

JamesLee
01January
2009

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-02 09:25 PM

wonderful James!! Happy New Year my lovely friend

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-01-02 10:48 PM

JamesMichael - brings back memories of walking the beach. Nice write...

BC

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-01-02 11:02 PM

Hmmm, all those kisses she got. What a lucky woman! I hope the tides never stop coming in, James. You both deserve the love you share.

A

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2009-01-02 11:35 PM

Dang I don't even want to know what happens if there is a tsunami wave!

Or do I... ? ...

Keep up the good work my friend.
And the good writing, too.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-01-03 03:31 AM

You have these warm beautiful romantic scenes down really good James....This is another one that creates lovely images....

Eric

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2009-01-03 08:45 AM

JamesM...very sweet
Wishing you a very Happy New Year

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2009-01-03 08:46 PM

Thank you Bill, Alison, Richy, ethome and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...James

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2009-01-04 03:48 PM

ouah James it is so romantic, thank you for sharing.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

9 posted 2009-01-04 06:22 PM

Yo James,

This poem has excellent rhythm and meter.

Bobby

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