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VampireWifey
New Member

since 2008-11-24

Posts 8
Albany,NY

0 posted 2009-01-02 07:11 PM

Pain deep inside

noone sees the pain that is inside of me that has dried my eyes out from crying
The intense burning of my anger sends my rage to a blaze.
The smile I wear is to conceal the fear that has been left behind
My emotions paint a picture of a girl who has committed sins that war inside of me.
she has pleas of sorrow and pain
wishing she could just fly away into a world that understands her.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2009-01-02 07:39 PM

interesting, insightful write...welcome to PiP...interesting username, if I may say so

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-01-02 10:44 PM

VampireWifey - yes, a most interesting write. Sorry about the pain, but one day it will pass...

BC

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2009-01-04 05:25 AM

Oh this poem is like you looked at me and wrote the words these are my feelings exactly
Excellent write
Thank you for putting my feelings to pen this is excellent

Well penned

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2009-01-04 05:28 AM

Courtney.. I wish you pain free days soon .. sending some of my special RDB

your way

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-01-04 11:57 AM

"wishing she could just fly away into a world that understands her."

~ Well, methinks you just did! Hi, VampireWifey! Welcome to pipTalk!

May 2009 be a year of draining away the pain and wonderful experiences flooding in to take its place!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,
Earth Angel

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

6 posted 2009-01-07 05:45 PM

i understand this completly. i know tht feeling. ur not alone.
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

7 posted 2009-01-09 03:31 PM

welcome and nicely done ^_^

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

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