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VampireWifey
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since 2008-11-24
Posts 8
Albany,NY

0 posted 2009-01-02 06:52 PM



me and you

Here I sit,thinking of you
wondering what is to become of us
understanding what I have been through and putting it all to the side
Everyday my heart aches to be with you
your unique and special qualities amaze me
your smile
your touch
your kiss
your abilty to make me smile when I do not want to
my feelings for you go beyond words that I can say
There were days when I doubted if you were real or not
also that this is was all a dream
Thoughts of you run through my mind day and night
I hope someday you understand How much I love you.

© Copyright 2009 courtney - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2009-01-02 06:59 PM


Welcome to our blue pages Courtney... I enjoyed reading your work...

I think we all tend to feel this way after someone leaves us or we leave them.... I hope you are able to smile again soon...

  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

YoungatHeart2
Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81

2 posted 2009-01-02 07:22 PM


Don't let others convince you to deny how you feel or push those feelings aside. There is love that will last forever inspite of the forces that seem to cause it to peel away layer by layer.
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-01-02 07:31 PM


Ah the hurt surfaces from the heart to the mind and keeps reminding one of the delicate difficulties associated with love.

I know where you're coming from with this one.

Eric

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

4 posted 2009-01-02 08:47 PM



"Me and you"
"I love You"
"Let's be, us"

How come all the real meaningful words always come in threes?

Welcome dear poet,
and Merry New Year!

Richy

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