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YoungatHeart2
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since 2008-12-12
Posts 81


0 posted 2009-01-01 08:02 PM



to die is an....
end to the sadness
end to the pain
end to the disappointment
end to other's expectations
end to the loneliness
end to the guilt
end to the failure
end to the fear
end to the darkness
end to the struggle
end to the uncertainty
end to the self hatred
end to the fight
end to being invisible
end to the person I can never be



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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-02 04:23 AM


A very sad view on life but i suspect a lot of people would readily agree with you,

Excellent poem well written
Thank you for sharing

Annie

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