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Richy
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0 posted 2009-01-01 05:01 PM



Let me be
the body piercing
that glistens
against the skin,
of your words,
and penetrates,
your flesh,
of  thoughts,
as I make,
my own,
body language,
in your,
poetry,
in your, figure

of speech.

Let me dictate
to you
my musings,
my feelings,
onto your,
sensuous vernacular,
with my, fluidity,
with my, vociferous,
mouthpiece,
as I give you,
my oration,
my diction,
my key note,

address.

Vocalize
your own oral,
expressions,
to me,
in your own,
tongue,
as it revolves
and rolls over
your own appetite,
your own urges,
your own desires,

of intimation.

Be my little,
chickadee,
the little woodpecker
on my forest,
of fables,
and fantasy,
smacking away
at the trunk
of my petrified pining,
my timber of legend,
and tall tales,
as I rub,
and soothe away,
the scratch,
of your lubricity.

Be the skin
to my flint,
so that we can
ignite our own
flicker of fallacy,
our own volumes,
of verbiage,
of fire,
and luminosity.

Let me be,
your spelling bee
as I cocke the pistil
of your petals pudenda
pollinating,
your glistening,
buds of fruition
and delivery,
in the crimson clover
of your,

fulfillment.


Be the airplane
to my pilot,
as I push,
into your cockpit
and gain new heights,
in our, inclination,
skin diving,
back down,
into the furrow,

of your conceiving.

© Copyright 2009 Richy - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-01-01 06:23 PM


My goodness, Richy! You render me 'speechless' once again with the passion ~ and brilliance ~ of your writing. I literally am having a difficult time keying a reply that adequately expresses my awe!

Just know this, I think yer da bomb!

Have a love-filled new year!


Linda


Richy
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2 posted 2009-01-01 06:30 PM


I think yer da bomb (what are we Peter Sellers now lol) too Linda Lou!

Don't stand too close to me though dear, you might ignite my fuse lol.

Kaboom!!!

Oops, too late!


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2009-01-01 06:36 PM


oh Richy!! it is so wonderful to read you again my lovely friend!! Loved this offering from you... you sure do have a way with words!

Happy New Year from Down Under!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Richy
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4 posted 2009-01-01 06:46 PM



How lucky it is me, to know and share in the graceful beauty of your spirit Roniece. I have missed your charming personality, and your picture that always captivates so.

Wishing you and yours a most Happy Merry Holiday!

So nice to hear from you again.


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5 posted 2009-01-01 09:13 PM


Oh God, I am laughing so hard here.  This is wonderful and funny.  I want to shout out, "Oh please.  Yes, please."  How corny of me but I love this poem, Richy.

Alison

Richy
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6 posted 2009-01-01 09:33 PM


That's okay Alison I'm used to being laughed at lol.

How I've missed your unequaled enchantment my dear.

Don't ever change okay, we'd spin off into the void if you did.



Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
7 posted 2009-01-01 10:33 PM


Oh - I am laughing at your creativity.  You are wonderful.  Yep, you are!

A

Richy
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8 posted 2009-01-01 10:42 PM


Okay now Ali dear, when I said I was used to being laughed at, now I'm thinking... maybe not so much.

That was a little jokey joke there lol.

Okay well, anywho...



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
9 posted 2009-01-02 01:23 AM


You'll never get a freelance job in the 'adult' world but this is as cleverly constructed in innuendo as can be conceived.
The verisimilitude is excellent.....!

Eric

Richy
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10 posted 2009-01-02 03:04 AM



That's okay Ethome I already have one in that, biz, thanks for asking though.

My challenge here, is to get as close as possible, to that edge.

Happy New Year Dear Poet!

steavenr
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11 posted 2009-01-02 11:59 AM


let's see, having arrived safely through the minefield of euphimisms, I find myself blushing with appreciation for the double entendre...loved this:

"onto your,
sensuous vernacular"

Richy
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12 posted 2009-01-02 12:28 PM


Lol, I've never liked puzzles but I sure like fitting words together.

Thank you kind poet for risking the mines lol.


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