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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Missing Pages Every day I turn back to my past Feeling emotions today Feeling so sad Feeling lost Feeling so sad Feeling so bad Looking back it's hurts I am just in love with you Now it's just in a name Never been the same The words you wrote it long back on my mind Being myself Losing my mind faith on you Missing pages of my life Looking at each page As I turn Each time I feel so lost in a memory of you looking at this book Where I slowly turn the pages As I read them I find them some missing pages It has been ages Missing pages |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I really liked the missing pages theme Vandana, like that incomplete book, or life. Terrific writing! I hope this new year bring you a whole new chapter of joy, full, and intact.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Vandana, I hope that one day when you are flipping back that all the missing pieces have been filled in. I really enjoy your poetry - you show so much of what is churning inside you. Happy New Year - may it bring you all you wish for. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like the theme too, vandana. I always read your writing. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a nostalgic romanticism...nice write |
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mandamaywhoviay Junior Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 12 |
Wow, this is very good. I really like the theme of it, it makes me think outside the box, and get a better understanding on your situation. very, very good. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the title of this. Very nicely expressed Vandana.....I enjoyed the read. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Vandana, The construction of this poem is interesting. I like the thoughts a lot. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - this is one of your better writings in my opinion. Full of heartfelt feelings and words to express them. Well done... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enlightening metaphor, enjoyed it. yann |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Hello lovely gal~ Always nice to see your lovely thoughts on the blue pages~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful Vandana... Happy New Year my lovely friend ... RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Zaineb Junior Member
since 2009-05-22
Posts 27Denmark |
Wow, i know it's long time ago you wrote this, but it is really good, I just want to tell that this one of the best i have read on this site it say so much |
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