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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-01-01 11:05 AM





Hoping You Will Be In Touch

Could you remember back
When thoughts came to mind
It had opened up our world
All those places we could find

We both took the journeys
In using the same imagination
Having touched in thoughts
Minds strolling in conversation

Back and forth many times
Minds travelled to every scene
We always had agreement
As thoughts were clearly seen

We made it easy to journey
Venturing with mutual consent
Thoughts consciously aware
We were both happily content

The yesteryears I reminisce
Times we had shared so much
As the new year began today
I am hoping you will be in touch


HopeĀ©2009

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Richy
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1 posted 2009-01-01 11:45 AM



Dear Hope, your poetry is as beautiful as I remember.
What a lovely expression to start the new year with, hope.

Lovely dear poet!

Alison
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2 posted 2009-01-02 11:09 PM


Just sweet wishes and remembrance in your poem, Hope.  May this new year bring you happiness and wonder.

Alison

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2009-01-02 11:55 PM


HopeS - I find this writing very touching, may you have a great new year...

BC

ethome
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4 posted 2009-01-03 03:33 AM


What a lovely way to express it! Excellent writing!

Eric

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2009-01-03 08:50 AM


Hoping you are able to keep in touch


M

mandamaywhoviay
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6 posted 2009-01-03 11:22 AM


This is so beautiful. =]
I hope whoever this is to will remain in your life for a very long time.

steavenr
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7 posted 2009-01-03 12:30 PM


thoughts...imaginations...memories...a beautiful subject matter for such a lovely write...here's to the hoping and the keeping...of being in touch...wonderful write
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