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Open Poetry #44
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j Tomorrow
Junior Member
since 2008-08-31
Posts 14
Boston

0 posted 2008-12-31 07:17 PM



Green and black bracelet
Haircut I've never seen
Confused, too complicated to converse
Too stuttered to read your name tag
I couldn't even get your name...
Your piercings? I forget
I can only remember not being able,
able to forget that hair

What is about your earthen brown eyes
or were they green?
verdure green eyes
matching that hair I have never seen
How at first glance did I second guess you
"Too unique for me?!"
your first words knocked me dead
and I forget what you said
I guess as memory of you withers;
not to be mean
I just can't forget your haircut

a haircut I've never seen

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amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2009-01-01 01:08 AM


Wow..it must have really been something!
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