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Marc-Andre
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0 posted 2008-12-30 01:44 PM



That morn, we harbored by the leafy oak
Where sun had yet to parch fresh dew on grass;
Its arching branches the desired cloak
Would furnish us, a doss where we’d have brass
To draw within its shadow skirt our soke
As damselfies accoutred our madras:
From there we had renounced lush  fields of berries
To munch each other’s lips as they’d been cherries.

We lay as marl and loess clung to our chests,
Our cheeks were still imbued with morning dew,
And there I made a banquet of your breasts
As you perused my late penned billet-doux;
Your dainty hands my back and arms  caressed
As with your lips you would my  nape  bedew:
Soon conscious that our hearts and flesh were swooning
Our eyes agreed it was but the beginning.

© Copyright 2008 Marc-Andre Germain - All Rights Reserved
YoungatHeart2
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1 posted 2008-12-30 03:02 PM


mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......
beautifully written

Marc-Andre
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2 posted 2008-12-31 09:10 AM


Thanks for the nice comment Happy New Year! Mark

[This message has been edited by Marc-Andre (12-31-2008 10:59 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-12-31 06:13 PM


"Your dainty hands my back and arms  caressed
As with your lips you would my  nape  bedew:
Soon conscious that our hearts and flesh were swooning
Our eyes agreed it was but the beginning. "


nicely written~~

M

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4 posted 2009-01-01 10:29 AM


~ and what a scrumptuously sensuous "beginning" it be!!!!!!!!!!

Gosh, you sure know how to write ~ and to love!

Fabulous write ~ and read!!!!

May the beginning come to fruition in the coming new year!


Linda

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5 posted 2009-01-01 07:01 PM


Very lovely, Marc-Andre.  Happy New Year - may you continue to share with us through 2009.

Alison

Marc-Andre
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6 posted 2009-01-07 05:25 AM


Heartfelt thanks for the nice comments, and a Happy New Year to you all Mark
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