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viking_metal
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0 posted 2008-12-29 09:03 PM


Dear me,
I can change you mister man
morph you into something I enjoy:
something that isn't embarrassed ,
something that never quits,
something that doesn't grow weary,
at least not easily.

Mister man,
You have exactly two point five months
to become something wonderful.

_______________________________________

So this is what it's like to laughsmilecrydie.


Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

© Copyright 2008 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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1 posted 2008-12-30 01:01 AM


VM... I too have about that much time to do some transformations...good luck with yours, I hope you find it an easy journey/task!!!

My credit's not Bad...I'm just protecting myself from identity theft!

viking_metal
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2 posted 2008-12-31 11:14 AM


Ah, I'm taking all the necessary steps, ma'am.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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3 posted 2009-05-15 02:32 AM


So did you morph?  Because I like the poem even if you didn't.

A

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4 posted 2009-05-15 11:43 AM


Ah, yeah, sometimes change is a necessary part of being.

Well done.

viking_metal
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5 posted 2009-05-16 07:58 PM


Ali-soon... I morph consistently and constantly. But I am always going to be plain old Paul.

KayKay... Thank you ma'am. Change is nearly always mostly sorta good.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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