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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England

0 posted 2008-12-29 04:47 AM



The Widowed Wife

I want my beating heart to stop "as yours did"
I want my life as it was, "befor you died"
Was it a cruel joke that God took you home,
And left me With nowhere to hide,

I just cant understand it,
You were fine in the light of day,
You felt so weak as the night drew in,
And thats when God took you away,

I knew we were meant forever,
I found My soul mate the love of my life,
But your heart was to weak to survive,
And you made a widow of your wife,

Annie
6-8-2008

© Copyright 2008 Annie - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-12-29 07:45 AM


very sad and touching, thank you for sharing.

yann

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2008-12-29 09:02 AM


it seems we always know ahead of time
don't we..enjoyed this

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
3 posted 2008-12-29 10:25 AM


2islander2 and Dark Stranger
Thank you i am glad you liked my poem...

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2008-12-29 02:05 PM


Anniepimm - I felt the same, sadness and very touching write...

BC

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2008-12-29 02:41 PM


So sorry for tour loss, Annie. Beautiful tribute to your husband.
                                Ida

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
6 posted 2008-12-29 05:37 PM


Thank you Ida
The poem is for my Daughter for the loss of her husband, This is what i felt from her,

Annie

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