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Broken Body |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Broken Body In a body that is worn and broken, But my spirit is intact and alert, Although i can not communicate, My feelings can be hurt, It may seem like, i am not listening, And that my mind, is somewhere not known to you, But i am fully aware of my surroundings, You think i cannot communicate, “ But i do“ I scream at you, for attention, I shout for you, to give me time, Please take the time to listen, I do live in this body of mine, My limbs are stiff and immobile, I can not run, and my arms will never be open, But inside, i am still a person, Even though my body is broken, Annie, 28-09-2008 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hear you, Annie. Ida |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Ida.. |
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YoungatHeart2 Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81 |
what a dynamic view from a horrible state... though sad, I really enjoyed this. YaH2 |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you i am glad you liked it |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is rather a sad poem but I enjoyed reading it Just the same. Don't lose heart my dear for roses will bloom again for you. Take care. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have a cousin with MS... this touches deeply. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thanks everyone, |
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