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Thoughts From A Windows Edge
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Thoughts From A Windows Edge |
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Robert Anderson New Member
since 2008-12-28
Posts 7Scotland |
Thoughts From A Windows Edge Droplets of glistening flow, slipping, sliding then stop to cascade within a vision. Clandestine within this winters concerto of a Utopian solace, to solidify where journeys end, within so cold and lonely abandonment, they shudder my whispers. Orchestrated in waves of tears, meeting, caressing, ending. Cold rustic crystallisation of a thousand thoughts melt in conjecture to touch, like the so many faceless lovers before me. Tearing wave after wave within my solace, nipping and gnawing. A disillusion of abandoned mass, creating a nemeses of confines within a volcanic mind, that stems from the core or isolation, and a conscience of existence. Manifesting till erodes summers awaken, and belligerence smiles with a maturated sarcasm, culminating on lost, fleeting moments in a saturated circumference of weighted karma. Where grinding wheels turn and windmills lose their sails So little time where cold water flows, © Robert Anderson 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WOW!! your writing has an impact Robert.. I was mesmerised ... welcome to our pages blue.. I hope you enjoy your time with us here.. look forward to reading more of your work... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Robert! Welcome to pipTalk! I was mesmerized by your "thoughts from a window ledge". I also appreciate your colourful use of the English language. btw You hale from the land of my forebears!  "Tearing wave after wave within my solace" ~ aptly descriptive! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug and blessings of joy for the coming new year!  Earth Angel  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Robert, Welcome to Passions! Thank you so very much for leaving your thoughts on one of my recent poems, it was very much appreciated! Please, check your email for a Very Special Welcome! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Robert Anderson New Member
since 2008-12-28
Posts 7Scotland |
Hi there and thank you everyone for such a lovely greeting. I loved the card you sent me. I am an artist and every poem or piece has a painting behind it. I like to irrigate my my art with my poetry and photography as I feel that they co-exist together. I just don't know or have figured out how to post my artwork along with my poetry when posting.This piece goes with a painting I created called, "Arctic Warmth" you can see my artwork and other poems at my private site. http://no-reflections.synthasite.com/index.php Thank you all so much for reading... Bobby xxx |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert, Email me when you can; I think I can help you along. Always, K |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Robert, This is beautiful and, oh so, cold! Welcome to PiP - I love the word painting that you painted for us. Alison |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Much enjoyed this piece of floating uni-verse. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Robert~ WELCOME to the blue pages of Passions In Poetry~ quote:I certainly have enjoyed observing how you make your "whispers" "shudder"~ Absolutely gorgeous, with refreshing and uniquely brought-to-life images~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After reading the poem you posted, I was going to welcome you to PIP. But then I visited your website... and my, oh my... WELCOME TO PIP!!!! *S* I went from shaking with laughter to silent weeping... your poems pack a powerful punch and I can't wait to read still more!!! |
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Robert Anderson New Member
since 2008-12-28
Posts 7Scotland |
Hello all and thank you so much. I am sorry if I have taken long to get back to you but being an artist and writer takes up so much time that I forget what day it is. I am just so really snowed under and a member of half the Internet sites It takes me ages to get around to everyone. Anyway thanks ever so much for your replies. Bobby xxx |
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