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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-12-28 03:33 PM



On the 9th
of November
your leaves
became lyricists

i collapsed
in this madness
and prepared
for the avalanche

buried in scarlet
coated in conifers

i suffered contusion
but escaped execution
as the rakes
sweeping blindside,
threatened cremation

i recovered in August
thickened with branches
standing guard
at your Kingdom

i was layered in lavendar.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-30-2008 07:09 PM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-12-28 07:08 PM


how beautiful you write Ms Inkey.. how beautiful you write... love and RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-12-28 07:24 PM


Goddess, you truly must be a deva divine.

Michelle, may 2009 be filled with the splendor of Nature's Light for you and your loved ones.


Linda

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2008-12-28 09:44 PM



A very cute post Michelle, you wrote it well. Love

Lindsay

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2008-12-28 10:28 PM


inkedgoddess - in my eyes you would look rather lovely in lavender. Nice write, as always...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2009-01-01 10:58 AM


..."your leaves
became lyricists"...

you dear one, give inspiration and grace to all of us that read your whispy thoughts.

Enjoyed the beautiful flutter of the leaves and the stays.

Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

6 posted 2009-01-01 11:56 AM


Very sweet dear poetess, your poetry was missed!

Wishing you a very merry new year!

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