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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2008-12-28 12:16 PM


Wedded Bliss
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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-12-28 12:21 PM


nice romanticism!

applause!

threadbear
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2 posted 2008-12-28 12:37 PM


Bill, been meaning to tell you this for a long time, but you are the master of lyrical romantic poetry!!
Jeff

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3 posted 2008-12-28 04:05 AM


Very lovely.  You have romance that flows in your veins - I see it in your poetry.

Alison

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-12-28 05:20 AM


Dear Bill,
you write so beautifully about this bliss! Deeply enjoyable!

Love and joy.
Margherita

amusemi
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5 posted 2008-12-28 06:42 AM


This is so tender and sweet.  It's beautiful.  
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2008-12-28 08:55 AM


This is especially romantic Bill.
As always, a beautiful poem

M

Martie
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7 posted 2008-12-28 01:40 PM


Hi Bill...Lovely romance here, I hope it is true for you.  
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2008-12-28 03:23 PM


a most lucky gal to partake in such nuptials with one as lovely as you, BillCharles
Nan
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9 posted 2008-12-28 05:38 PM


Hoping and expecting this to be a true story as well..

I'm smiling, Bill..


Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 2008-12-28 06:30 PM


I really enjoy reading you romantic poems. You know, sometimes all it takes is just a warm, tender, loving kiss.
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11 posted 2008-12-28 08:30 PM



Bill you are indeed the master when it comes to writing romantic poetry, so much enjoyed. Take care my friend.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2008-12-28 09:11 PM


secondhanddreampoet - thank you for the applause, and comment...

threadbear - your comment means a great deal to me, thank you for it...

Alison - your kind words also flow through these veins. Thank you Alison...

Margherita - I'm glad you enjoyed this writing, thanks for coming by...

amusemi - your words have touched me, thank you...

nakdthoughts - I love to write about romance, as you know. Deeply grateful for your comments...

Martie - nothing like meaningful romance, thank you for reading this write, and for your comments...

inkedgoddess - your thoughts are as lovely as you, I appreciate your words...

Nan - my dearest friend, thank you for reading this writing, and for your cherished comments...

Oklahoma Rose - may your rose be as warm as your response to this writing. Thank you...

LinsayP - thank you my friend for saying this about my writings. I'm glad you enjoy them. Take care also...

BC

YoungatHeart2
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13 posted 2008-12-28 09:28 PM


Beautiful words for vows, I think.
Ariana
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14 posted 2008-12-28 10:44 PM


Bill:

I must ask you this one question: Are you employed by the Kleenex people??  Lovely poem and yes, you have to experience the emotion to accurately write about it.  Then the true words flow with meaning.

Ariana

HopeS
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15 posted 2008-12-28 10:55 PM


Beautifully expressed straight from the heart and so touching


Hope

Bill Charles
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16 posted 2008-12-28 11:37 PM


YoungatHeart2 - I'm sure there are a few words that can be used. Thank you for the reply...

Ariana - H'mmmm, haven't thought of that before, I may see if they can use me. As you well know, emotions felt bring out words which are true with meaning. Nice to see you on here, and thanks for replying once again...

HopeS - thank you for your kind reply, glad you were touched by this write...

BC

2islander2
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17 posted 2008-12-29 07:57 AM


Hi Bill, to be cherished like that surely make happy, simple and deep poem full of authenticity. Thank you for the poem.

yann

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18 posted 2008-12-29 02:26 PM


Bill, it is always a pleasure to watch love get all over your shirt this way..wear it forever guy!
Marchmadness
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19 posted 2008-12-29 02:54 PM


You do romance very well. Bill.
                             Ida

Bill Charles
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20 posted 2008-12-29 10:10 PM


2islander2 - yes, to be cherished is a good thing. Appreciate the comments...

Dark Stranger - H'mmmm, kinda thought something was getting over the shirt, wasn't sure what it was though. Thanks for clarifying. Thanks so much for your thoughts...

Marchmadness - I'm happy that you thought highly of this write, I try to write about romance a little bit anyhow. Thanks Ida...

BC

Sharon Rose
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21 posted 2008-12-29 10:39 PM


Bill, as always beautiful poetry.
Bill Charles
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22 posted 2008-12-29 10:56 PM


Sharon Rose - thank you once again for reading my writings and replying graciously as you do...

BC

JamesMichael
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23 posted 2008-12-31 12:14 PM


A pleasure to read...James
ethome
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24 posted 2008-12-31 03:22 AM


Ah, you're such a romantic Bill....That second verse is simply romance and familiarity plus.....
Great work my friend!

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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25 posted 2008-12-31 05:50 PM


Yo Bill,

This is good.  That's the way it's supposed to be, and most times is.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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26 posted 2008-12-31 06:40 PM


James - thank you, glad you stopped by...

ethome - love that romance, thanks for reading and replying...

Bobby - unfortunately it's not always so, but I loved writing this...

BC

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