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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-12-27 09:42 PM



Smiling


How much do I miss her
when she's not around?
Immeasurable numbers
of minutes, and then
she comes around and
before I can tell her
how much I missed her
we're smiling.


JamesLee
26December
2008





  

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-12-27 10:12 PM


most pleasantly romantic!

applause!

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2008-12-27 10:33 PM


Awwww, how sweet.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-12-27 10:51 PM


I think you call that love James!     beautifully said.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2008-12-28 12:03 PM


James - beautifully written, a smile for each other, nice touch...

BC

threadbear
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5 posted 2008-12-28 12:39 PM


True enough, James,
a smile tells more much
than words do.
Jeff

nourzihane
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6 posted 2008-12-28 04:03 AM


Dear James

you have a nice written

wish you the best

Nourzihane

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7 posted 2008-12-28 04:32 AM


James,

When you are smiling like this - I think we all smile with you.

Alison

Margherita
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8 posted 2008-12-28 05:16 AM


Ah, you caught the beauty of this moment so nicely!
Smiling together with you!

Love and joy.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-12-28 09:31 AM


Smiling, here! ~ Big time!

May the coming new year be a very happy one for both of you!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

YoungatHeart2
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10 posted 2008-12-28 09:24 PM


This was so very sweet.
It can almost be harder to write a short precise piece than it is to write a long epic one. Well done.....

Markus
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11 posted 2008-12-28 09:26 PM


i feel giddy from this poem, nice one.
LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-12-28 10:02 PM



As long as you keep smiling James we will all smile with you. Have a happy day my friend.

Lindsay

2islander2
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13 posted 2008-12-29 07:58 AM


true words beautifullyn expressed, I love your beautiful simplicity.

yann

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2008-12-29 09:36 PM


Thank you secondhandreampoet, Oklahoma Rose, Roniece, Bill, threadbear,
nourzihone, Alison, Margherita, Earth Angel, YoungatHeart2, Markus, Lindsay and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...much appreciated...and I'm smiling...James

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