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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Comfortless Under a falling star over bare mountains in the pure moonlight just beyond the cold, fleeting sunset... no one is a friend to the Winter wind. --- b. e. adams (12/27/2008) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No one, but you, dear Bruce, for you have written this beautiful poem for it. Your usual touch of melancholy, which is so elegantly penned. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Winter winds can blow so cold and lonely. May your sunsets be glorious and never fleeting. Warm hug to you, dear Poet, Linda  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello lovely Bruce... I am so pleased to see you posting again with us.... your words always bring me a smile... thank you and good wishes to you for the coming year.. may it bring you lots of peace and happiness... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Perfect, Bruce, just perfect. There is an a Chinese story I just read this week about how they fear the invisible: the wind, and not to show fear to those things visible. Jeff |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
That's Wind to a T. We don't even say the word hear, because we are paranoid it will hear us! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
That's so true. Who like the cold winter wind? Not me! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - when the cold winds of winter blow through a touch of spring will eventually appear. Nice write... BC |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
b.e. This is beautiful. You wrote it perfectly. A |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce....I've always loved wind. You've personified it here beautifully. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The cold, winter wind can be the very heart of loneliness but then comes that playful spring wind that makes one glad to be alive. No one understands (or writes about nature) like you do, Bruce. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love walking in the winter wind, but only when properly dressed for Arctic conditions.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This one Bruce is my absolute favorite of yours! ~ I have no words to express how I feel! All I am going to say is that I LOVE this poem~  I am putting this one to my treasure box of Poetry! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, This is very true. Bobby |
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