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ConderE
Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-10-01 12:15 PM


An Unguided Love

I wander through the dark
Trying to make a spark
That may turn into a fire
A Desire
For someone
That will come into my life
And make it worthwhile

She has come
And quick as a flash
Stole my heart
But it longed for another
One that was everything that I ever dreamed.

But both have a place in my heart
I can’t choose one without my world falling apart.
But I was too quick.
And didn’t follow my heart

The one that I long
Is like a beautiful song
She is always on my mind
And I wish that I had taken the time
To realize that you are my one, my dream

© Copyright 1999 ConderE - All Rights Reserved
ConderE
Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29
TX, USA
1 posted 1999-10-02 01:01 AM


If you read this poem, please post your comments, or e-mail me at ConderE@hotmail.com
theKUTEone
New Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 4

2 posted 2000-06-18 04:16 PM


What a beautiful poem!  You have put into words, how I feel, but with guys not girls, hehe!  it's good to know that i'm not the only like that.=Þ
LoveAlwayz~~theKUTEone~~

Phoebee
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ
3 posted 2000-07-09 07:56 PM


That's a great poem.  Love is a mysterious thing.  


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-13 07:47 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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