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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
You put your arms around me, you kiss me goodnight, so why do i feel like things arent alright? seldom do you smile, i wish i knew why. dont i make u happy? or do i make u cry? You act like im everything but i dont think thats true, cause u can live without me, but i cant live without u. i show u all the love my heart can bare, and when im sad u do not care. i think u love yourself, more than u love me, but i guess thats it, thats how it has to be. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I really liked this one. At one time I had these exact feelings. Great poem. I loved it. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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watch_me_score New Member
since 2007-04-08
Posts 3 |
cool poem, I've felt this way before and it's the worst feeling. |
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shsvolleyballer13 New Member
since 2007-07-06
Posts 1Idaho |
I love this poem i know exactly how you feel i felt like this with my ex. i hope to see more poems from you! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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