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Teen Poetry #1

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chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-09-29 11:03 PM

We're okay one minute,
the next we're not.
even though i give u all the love I've got.
One minute, life sucks,
the next its great.
Sometimes u love and sometimes u hate.
But i always love,
always care for you.
But i guess its too much,
cause im always feeling blue.
No one understands,
no one wants to care,
and all u see is the tears,
on my face u see despair.
But thats nothing to you,
and i dont know why.
am i that bad,
now i wish i could fly.
Fly away from you,
but i must stay,
cause i could not live without u in any way.

SWEETLADIE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 11
BRONX,NEW YORK,UNITED STATES

1 posted 1999-09-30 10:07 AM

this poem was great because it made me think a little about the realtionship i am in a little keep up the good work!

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2001-10-23 10:35 AM

Hey chicka I know exactly how ya feel. I once wrote a poem about that too. But I'd neva let n one read it cause I still feel the same way about him. I luv him so much and I know that he has feelings for me but I don't think his are as strong as mine. I love him and I always will.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 07:48 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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