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ladybugs
New Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 1
Wyomissing, PA USA

0 posted 1999-09-28 09:14 PM


Hey Everyone...I need to know what you think about this one PLEASE!


As I wander down the path of life,
I see you sitting there.
You entered my life years ago,
And you've caused me great dispair.
But with all those many years of pain,
The happy times were there.
There were many laughs and joyous hugs
With tender love and care.

As I wander down the path of life,
the memories I see.
And most of them are happy ones
Because they're of you and me!
-Ladybugs


So people Email and tell me what you think
Ladybugs43@aol.com

© Copyright 1999 ladybugs - All Rights Reserved
Lauren
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 21
FORT PIERCE ,FL
1 posted 1999-09-28 09:22 PM


good poem!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:41 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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