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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-26 10:46 PM



Our Eyse

When my eyes met yours I felt
pure heaven.
Then you just kept walking by in
the crowded street.
I guess your eyes didn't feel the
same way about mine.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

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Mark4Him@juno.com
Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA
1 posted 1999-09-28 12:03 PM



once again,i like it.it's simple,and i've often felt the same way.it seems we have a lot in common.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:39 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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