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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-26 09:38 PM

Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision,
Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze.
Beauty dances with the early morning sun,
Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves.

Boundless skies are feathered creamy white,
As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow.
By your side I embrace the perfect sight,
And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow.

The flight of time seems so distant here,
Almost as if for us, the world has stilled.
I feel so complete when you hold me near,
A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled.

If love were a vision, it surely must be this,
Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves.
Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss,
And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-27 05:56 AM

I liked this poem alot. I can envision myself and my boyfrined together in a perfect autumn scene. It also saddens me, because I won't be going outside much this fall. I think you've brought me as close to the beauty of nature as I'll be getting anytime soon.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-09-27 10:05 PM

Thank you very much, Systematic Decay. This is what I experienced a few days ago and it touched me deeply. I personally love autumn.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Mark4Him@juno.com
Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

3 posted 1999-09-28 05:45 PM

An awesome poem.Makes me a little sad too because I won't be able to share a scene like this with my boyfriend.After the summer,he went back to his house,and there's an ocean between us.oh well.long distance relationships.....
Hey systematic Decay,why won't you be going outside much?

Melissa

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-13 07:40 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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