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CoolJewel
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since 1999-09-25
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Devon

0 posted 1999-09-25 11:19 PM


You told me you had feelings,
I told you I had none,
But later on I realized that I too had some.

By the time I realized it was just oh too late.
Another girl had told you, but she did not wait.
So my advice to you if you you know someone you love,
Don't be dumb and wait, tell them of your love.

A note from the writer: I'm 13 and have no idea what I'm doing and this is the first poem I have every written and I know probably stuff is wrong but I don't care!

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CoolJewel
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since 1999-09-25
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Devon
1 posted 1999-09-25 11:26 PM


Oops! I forgot a word--- So my advice you you IS if you know.... and the poem goes on.
I just wanted to tell ya'll that.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:30 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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