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Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 1999-09-22 12:12 PM


I long so much for a simple hug
someone to hold me tight for always.
That I might feel what love is,
with a gentle kiss laid on my lips.
Someone who really needs me,
gives my heart a safe place with theirs.
Protects me from all harm,
allows me to touch them softly.
Guides me with a gentle gesture,
resting thier hands on my body.
Carresing each others love,
molding our heart together.
I long so much for such a touch,
with such a need for affection.
True love-that will last,
last all through my life.
No simple pleasures,
just love to it's fullest extent.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~


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Piggy169
Junior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 10
Belleville IL USA
1 posted 1999-09-22 10:36 PM


I know how you feel, i have been there many times. Just wait it all out you have to remeber that someone is out there just for you and when you find them it will be unexpressable. It was a good poem and i thought it was well structured. Keep writting!!!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:25 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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