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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
Nothing goes my way today, and so I sit and cry. But if i had things my way, there'd be no more tears to dry. I sit and think everyone hates me, and as I lay in bed, i think if I had things my way, there'd be no more tears to shed. I wish i could go back, to those days where i did not care. Nothing mattered, I was happy, there were no tears to bare. All the times I've sat around, just thinking about you, while u couldnt care less if i was feeling blue. But this time around, I promise you, I will set aside my fears. cause from now on, I know I'll be ok, and there will be no more tears. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
more power to you my dear. ------------------ "If to rectify your demeanor, You must imitate another, Your philosiphy on morality Is a burden on your mentality, Your actions based on popularity, Will never fulfill you internally, Cuz the world was not blessed with equality, But rather with fake geniality. --823-- |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
THis poem rocks, someone hurt me really badly yet I still care. the only thing he cares about though is to get with more girls. Keep up the great work...... Maitay Mirabel Litton ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
I'm glad for some reason I decided to jump to the 3rd page when reading. This poem is very nicely written. I as well know the feeling, although I am a guy. The feeling is the same despite the slight differences in the situation. It's amazing though, I actually am now friends with the person that this poem reminds me of, 3 years later. -Matt ------------------ "Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin. |
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