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ConderE
Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-09-11 12:34 PM


My life is a mess,
I feel distress.
But when I see ur face
My heart starts to race
It pounds till it aches,
and then starts again.

I wonder when I will find the courage to speak,
And when I do, I hope my voice isn’t meek.
U’ve been the object of my heart,
Right from the start.
But I have been too shy,
To even whisper hi

So I ask from above
To give me the strength
To talk to the beauty
That has a place in my heart.

© Copyright 1999 ConderE - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-09-11 11:03 PM


I do hope you find that courage, ConderE. Wonderful piece of work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20

2 posted 1999-09-11 11:07 PM


I can relate to your poem!!! Nicely done!

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Trul¥ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




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