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Teen Poetry #1

Just close your eyes...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-10 10:52 PM

Just close you eyes
Our sight is limited in measure
Get closer than skin
And look for true pleasure
Above the clouds
Upon the moonlight street
Not only hands
But dreams will meet
Our minds will touch
And lose control
Through time and space
Our souls will whirl
Into the silence of the night
And rocking in a lazy motion
The river of our love
Will find an endless ocean
And there
Entangled in the summer heat
Not only hands
But dreams will meet
Just close your eyes...

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I fell in love and kept on falling

TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 20

1 posted 1999-09-11 11:26 PM

That is nice!!! getting intimate with somone aye!! I'm pretty sure you like dit. anyways,, i enojyed it. good job!!

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Trul¥ Preciou§

"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-09-12 02:33 AM

Thanks, your comments are truly precious.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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3 posted 1999-09-12 04:27 PM

Very nicely done. You write well...I enjoy your work.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-09-12 09:10 PM

Thanx Caroline!

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