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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
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0 posted 1999-09-09 03:15 PM


Alone in the cold, sad world,
I thought i was so down.
I knew happiness was in my heart,
the day it was you found.
Now its been so long,
so many tears I've cryed.
A lot of times I wish I'd died.
Hurt and pain,
is what my heart feels.
Day in, day out, I hope someday it heals.
Sometimes I was happy,
so happy to be with you,
but then I think of all the pain I've been through.
One day I wondered- why am I sad and how can this be?
and then I realized I was happy when it was just me.

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Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-09-09 09:13 PM


this is a wonderful poem

i luv it

i'm gettin over a lost love.. and i always thought it was him that made me happy.. but i realized the only person that can make me happy is myself..

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

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