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Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-09-08 11:29 PM


i think u love me
i love u too
but is ur love
really true?
if u will just
hold my hand
does it mean
youll understand?
i wanna be
with u a lot
but have u given
all u've got?
u understand me?
r u for real?
cuz i am telling u
what i feel
youll always love me?
u think u will?
it is true
our love is real?
i really hope so
i mean that too
i really hope
our love is true

© Copyright 1999 Tanya - All Rights Reserved
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
1 posted 1999-09-10 10:49 PM


can u guys please give some replays i wanna know what u think
thanx

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-09-11 12:03 PM


I think that ur poem is REALLY nice.
If u think u actually LOVE this guy, than he has to show his love back 2 u. If he doesnt, than ur wasting ur time. Tell me how things work out between u 2 ok

Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-09-12 12:12 PM


everythings going pretty well except i dont really LOVE him yet
SWEETLADIE
Junior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 11
BRONX,NEW YORK,UNITED STATES
4 posted 1999-09-15 11:18 AM


GREAT POEM
NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa
5 posted 1999-09-15 02:19 PM


I THINK YOUR POEM IS NICE,BUT NOTHING IS EVER FOR SURE.SO HANG IN THERE.~

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n.m.

Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
6 posted 1999-09-16 12:05 PM


THANX

nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
7 posted 1999-09-17 12:35 PM


pretty good. Keep Up the good work!

Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
8 posted 1999-09-18 01:06 AM




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