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Star Fairy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39
cerritos, ca, usa

0 posted 1999-09-05 10:03 PM


You took this situation
as a dammed confirmation
of your fearful sensations
and you already felt ready to let go
but reason to leave, you didn't know
now you can use this finally go

You taking all your fears and making them true
Why you hurt so bad, you have no clue
Because it will never matter that I was in love with you

Now you can pack your emotional baggas and go away
You may physically leave my sight but in my heart you will stay
forever and eternity, until my final dying day

I understand you need to leave
I know you can't stand the sight of me
In my dreams and fantasies we will forever be

So take your fears and run away
but remember this last thing I say
My heart's eyes on you will never stray.
090199



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823

© Copyright 1999 Star Fairy - All Rights Reserved
beowulf_26
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-09 07:54 PM


Very powerful. Having been in a situation similar, I was on the end of the subjuct of your poem, I send my heart out. I apologize for their actions but at the same time I can't. Leaving them is the best thing that can be done.
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-09-09 09:01 PM


Thank you. I think I had hung to my lil flame of hope too long .. but now I've realized it has burned out.

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

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