Reborn Hate ( Sequel to " What You Did to Me")

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Reborn Hate ( Sequel to " What You Did to Me")

Venus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 12
Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 1999-09-03 09:32 PM

Dear Reader;

Just to let you know, both poems " What You Did to Me" and it's sequel " Reborn Hate" are inspired by true stories, my own heart-breaking expirences. " What You Did to Me" was inspired by something that began over two years ago and stopped a while and began again. " Reborn Hate" is inspired by a extremely recent experience. Well, I hope you enjoy my newest work. Please sit back, relax, and let the words of my heart flow around you, like music.

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Hate has now become a common feeling.
So long ago it was born.
It makes me sad to know,
That I can feel this kind of hate.

I wait in total silence,
Like a hawk watching it's prey.
For a time when you are vunerable, weak.
I wait for my time of power.

But then, a total shock.
The question I dreaded most!
It was all a hoax to lure me in!
And then a strange desire.

An odd disire to say yes, to go with you.
A strong desire.
But no! I must be strong.
I must fight.

No! No! No! NOOO!
I must resist.
And so I do.
I have been strong once more.

I can read your eyes.
You yearn to own my heart once more.
You yearn for me.
You will not have me.

I fell with a broken heart to you once.
I will not fall again.
I'm over you now.
You can't have me back.

And so, my story will continue as it goes.
One day the hawk in me will have it's prey.
One day I will triumph.
One day.

One day.

Victory will be mine.

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

1 posted 1999-09-09 07:54 AM

This is one of the best I've seen so far. Keep up the good work.

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