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Zippie
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 7
Jackson, MI USA

0 posted 1999-09-03 09:25 PM


I don't always have the answers
But I promise to be there
When your skies have turned to gray
When life treats you unfair

I don't always say the right things
But I promise not to lie
If there's something I must say
I'll look you in the eye

If any doubts or shadows
Ever find their way to you
I promise I'll be praying
That God will get you through

Through all of life's tribulations
I promise to stand by your side
And be the Best Friend that I can be
No matter how steep the climb

© Copyright 1999 Zippie - All Rights Reserved
Lil'Sweets
New Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 6
Port st. Lucie FL USA
1 posted 1999-09-03 10:27 PM


I think that is the sweetest poem ever!
It toached my heart instintly!
I absolutley luved it!

Keep up the good work!!!

Raspberme
Junior Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 21
South Hill, WA, USA
2 posted 1999-09-04 07:19 PM


Your very good at showing your feelings! I luved that poem and I think I'm going to send it to my best friend, even though we're having troubles right now! Thank you for letting me read it! Keep writing!

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Raspberme

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