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Soup Of The Day |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
A little background on this one, I wrote this after a rather depressing and disappointing night. A girl I liked, and who supposedly liked me as well, stood me up cold and kinda pulled a complete 180 on me, this is about her and that night... Soup Of The Day So what was the soup of the day for you? Today my soup was too, too, too hot. It burned my tongue and in agony I screamed…. Quietly I did scream though So as not to disturb others' soup When set before me, the soup was regular Then it began to take form Twisting and swirling shapes Violent and rage-filled colors and motions Steam, drenched in pain, rose from the soup It engulfed my face and enflamed my eyes I felt the soups poison taking control I witnessed the hatred the soup possessed I became that hatred I signaled for the waiter to come to me Then very politely and calmly I said, "Sir would you be so good as to throw this soup away?" Then I rose from my seat and left No painful or agonizing soup got to me today What about you? ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm happy to know you didn't let that fateful night get you down!!  Justbleu |
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