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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-08-31 01:38 AM


My tears were falling,
you did not care,
case you did not know my hearts despair.
I proclaimed my love,
it was all I could say,
but all you did was turn away.
I thought, this is the end,
i was so sad,
and it was only cause u were so mad.
I know it was my fault,
cause of all I put you through,
but i never thought my punishment would be always feeling blue.
I love you so much, and it was not fair,
you didnt even look at me, you did not care.

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Star Fairy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39
cerritos, ca, usa
1 posted 1999-08-31 02:22 AM


i've been to the depths of these emotions.. and you've clearly explained the surface
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