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ANON
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 30
NZ

0 posted 1999-08-29 06:49 AM


if u were 2 show up on my front door, i'd take your lougage and put them away, you'd then follow a red carpet made fit 4 a queen, along the way u pick up a picnic basket, there the carpet ends but u then follow a trail of roses, u turn around I am gone.
u hear me call out your name, but dont know where i am, u follow my voice, it leads u outside to a garden, there u see me on a beautiful white stallion worthy of a king, i help u up. U grab me around the waist, u feel my warmth on your breats, u smell my hair, the scent of cammomile sends a tingle through your body.
We ride along the Beach under the nite sky, your satan white dress dancing in the air behind us like a godess of love u feel wild u feel free. We reach the foot of a cliff and proceed up it, finally we make it an iscolated grass clearing, we settle down.
We feed each other fruits, bread and wine, then u lay there against my chest then we kiss.........
we lie amongst our clothes, and gaze at the stars, then we look down at my home town, u now see my world, i look into your eyes and see your heart,then u look at me and see me cry.
4 this is like a dream come true, us together, me and u. As your here with me now, i crouch on bended knee, i hold and kiss your hand, and ask u 2 marry me.
i expected a yes but u said no, u said sorry kissed me then left me then, I cried once more, my heart will never love again.

© Copyright 1999 ANON - All Rights Reserved
krazidani16
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since 1999-09-04
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Hialeah,fl
1 posted 1999-09-18 01:33 PM


I really liked your poem it is very sweet but at the sam time very unexpected
-Summer Riley

Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
2 posted 1999-09-18 08:46 PM


GOD, how I wish that would come true for me. I would love to know that someone cared for me that much.... It takes an awesome guy to be like that for a girl.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~


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