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Teen Poetry #1

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Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

0 posted 1999-08-26 08:35 PM

Two tears are shed
One for you
One for me
Hoping to connect the worlds
Of
Two star-cross'd lovers
For their hearts and souls
Are already
One

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

1 posted 1999-08-26 09:12 PM

maybe you could simply title it .Two tears
nice poem!
Swan

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"I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam

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