please read this first poem

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Teen Poetry #1

please read this first poem

markdbarton
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 4

0 posted 1999-08-26 06:12 PM

The Garden

As the summer days pass
the feeling of love grows
the closeness never before shown
In the garden they had made
a love of which would never fade
the garden was a symbol of there lasting love
something shared to all that would come
As the years passed on there came many storms
but the love they shared carried them through
The storms of life that damage so many
the scars on these you could not find any
the love served as a protection from wind and rain
and also the pain
The garden still there even though they are gone
but the love once showed remains forever
and as long as there is love the garden will grow

[This message has been edited by markdbarton (edited 08-27-99).]

swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

1 posted 1999-08-26 09:20 PM

nicely done.
swan

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