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CrAyZeD Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 45 |
I have this amazing ability, to build unbreakable walls, many people try to climb over it, but all but one falls. I have this amazing ability, to appreciate you, I see right through your mask, and have fallen in love with you. With all these abilities, I lack but one that would make me shine, I lack the ability, to make the one I love mine. ------------------ Dont bet your money on fast horses, bet your money on slow rabits. [This message has been edited by CrAyZeD (edited 08-24-99).] |
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CrAyZeD Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 45 |
any day now ------------------ Dont bet your money on fast horses, bet your money on slow rabits. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey ED. People do read these, but you can't expect them to always respond. There are a TON of poems posted every day, and sometimes it is hard enough just to read through them, much less post anything. And as to your poem, I would say that sometimes the ability to build "walls" can be just as damaging as they can be helpful. Don't harden your heart, lest your heart harden you. ------------------ Everyone has a photographic memory... ...most of us just don't have film! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-25-99).] |
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