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Jo Leckne
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 1
Sweden

0 posted 1999-08-22 05:58 PM


Why did it ever go this far?
You tell my heart.

Why does it hurt to go to bed every night, knowing another day without you passed by.

Why do I see your face upon every cloud in the sky?

Why is this wrong when it feels so right?

Why are my smiles, jokes and apperance just fake?

Why can’t all this have been a bad dream?

Why can’t I continue without you?

Because you cannot live without a heart.

Please give mine back. Love forever/
Jo


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ILoveJ
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 16
Eugene, Or, US
1 posted 1999-08-22 11:45 PM


I liked your poem. It must have come from your heart and I'm sorry someone hurt you. I hope you feel better.You know that your self-esteem shouldn't come from someone else but if it does you need to stop and think and love your self.
With love,
Jocelyn

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